Editing video feedback and learner response
WWW:
Good use of soundtrack(creates a mysterious atmosphere)
Did all the targeted shots that were asked of
The dialogue was really nice and came along really well
Acting was good
Good script(very descriptive)
750-word essay extra which was good
EBI:
More use of other people instead of myself
Match on action could've been better and done more smoothly
Lines were said a little too fast perhaps talking slowly could help the audience understand more
. Did you meet the brief and successfully include the three key editing aspects we have learned?
Yes i have i believe i could've done the shots a little more accurate to make it work better and i have edited it along with the soundtrack to fit the theme of the story
What were the strengths and weaknesses of your final film? Write a detailed analysis picking out specific shots, edits and any other aspect of film language you think is relevant.
I liked the side shot where my head was at the front and the Christmas tree lit up in the background really brightened the scene more especially when I first saw it.Also the scene where my brother records behind his back signifies that there is a person I am talking to i like that shot.
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